2007年11月25日 星期日
Lazy
I have not concentrated on my schoolwork since I entered the Yuntech. There are many temptations here; for instance, surfing the internet, doing different activities, chatting with friends…etc. Although I know it's time to study, I still use my MSN. I didn't study at all. The only thing I can do is force myself to leave my computer. I want to study more, because I don’t want to waste a lot of time on the things that are not meaningful. I think I need more times and determination to adjust it.
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Hi Laura. I see there is some problem with your blog, as there are no October entries at all and nothing this month during the blog time period, which lasted from 10/22 to 12/2. There are totally only four days when you did entries during this time period, so your top score would be 33% if everything were perfect, which it isn't. I see what you mean in this entry; I urge you to use the third blog period to make up for the other 2 periods somewhat.
Be more careful as you write. "Yuntech" is a place name and needs no "the" before it. The semicolon (;) in sentence 2 should be a colon (:). "I haven't studied at all." "time" is uncountable and cannot be plural in this context. The "it" in the last sentence has no clear referent; what does "it" mean?
See the kind of mistake I mean? Watch out for them in future!
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