2007年11月7日 星期三
Inflation
Everything in this generation has been risen, such as gas, flour, gasoline, vegetables…etc. As you can see, everything you touch is too expensive to buy. The only thing that hasn't been risen is salary. Now it is more difficult to live than before. More and more families are worried about how to earn more money to make ends meet. The truth is the disparity between the rich and the poor.” The poor is still poor while the rich is still rich. This phenomenon is too hard to solve it, and it has been existing for a long time. These problems may be existed forever. All we can do is reduce them.
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You are using the passive voice and perfect tenses much too often and unsuitably. "...has risen..." "The only thing that hasn't risen is the average salary." I don't understand why you have one quotation mark in the middle of the paragraph. "The poor are still poor, while the rich are still rich." No need for "it" in the next sentence. "It has existed for a long time. These problems may never be solved."
28% for this period. Please do continue for the last period, which lasts from 12/3 to 1/6/08.
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