2007年10月21日 星期日

For teacher

I totally know what you mean. I'm so sad about my writing's grade only 40. And I eager to improve my writing skill. You mentioned that I should have spell checked and grammar checked. But all the articles are write by my own, if there are any problem about my grammar or spell, I would not know. Because I have been thought the grammar I write is right therefore, I would not discover how many times I read. I hope you can point out the wrong every article if you have more time, and I'll improve the wrong you pointed out. Before you read this article, I'll pass my article to my classmate that her check out.

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Litmus Paper 提到...

Hi Laura. Thank you for responding to my comments! Not many people do. If you have trouble catching your own mistakes, I recommend you write them one day, possibly on paper, and then the next day take a fresh look at it, and analyze your words. Does everything match, and suit the situation? I can't fix all your errors myself, or I'd never be able to finish, as I have so many students with the same type of errors! Showing your friend is also a good idea. Perhaps you can be blog partners and check each other's work.
"I am eager. . .all the articles were written by myself, so if there. . .I would not discover them, no matter how many times I read my work." Those are the main mistakes fixed for this post.
I'll keep checking for the final blog grade now.
Chris