2007年10月19日 星期五
Become colder
After the typhoon last time, the weather become colder. People who live in the northen may not feel cold, but people who live in the southen may feel the winter is coming. I'm the person who live in the southen. And the weather in here is different from my hometown. In my hometown, the weather there is hot and wet and sticky, and the temperature in day and night are not large diference. Though I don't use to the weather here, I like the cool weather here.
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Hi, Laura. I like what you've written so far in terms of content, but it's clear you have not spell checked or grammar checked your entries. Please do so in future. You ought to have at least 12 entries so far but I find you have only 5 of them--less than half of the required number, and all quite recent. Remember for next grade period to have 3 or more entries every week. For your first entry of the new period pick one of your blog entries so far and fix all its errors, OK? Thanks. Your grade this time is 40. Keep up next time and you will be fine.
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